Black Wind

I read the second poem you wrote and I can say, that you don't belong to average people. I like, how you share feelings of lyrical character with images of ...

It is a great poem!!! I like it at all. Beautiful words, images. It doesn't resemble other poems and songs about love. Sometimes, when I read poems of my friends ...

It is a good poem about existing problem. It made me feel all feelings of main character, for whom street became her home. I thought, that such people as that ...

Thank you for critique. It is my first song, translated from russian into english, that's why rhyme is not very good. :)

Hello! I think that beginning of the story done very good. It helps to imagine the atmosphere, makes reader interested in your story. I think, that if you said about ...

It is ten of evening on the city clock. The fires are blinking in the houses of neighbours. New Year's tree is blinking in the centre of the yard And ...

Hello! This song shows known for all of us state, when it seems, that ''life is running, running out of luck''. Many people went through this feelings. This song also ...

Oh, I see, that you are talented. :) It is the second your song, which I read. It will be sad song, but beautiful, I think. It is good song ...

Hello, Megan! People have already said all about punctuation. I want to say, that I like your poem. It made me think. It is poem with rhyme and rhythm. And ...

Hello! I like your song very much! And if you will use guitar for singing this song, it will be great! :D When I read this words, I thought, that ...

Musicaloo, thank you very much! I wrote two reviews. I haven't read many works yet. But there are many talanted people, I think. :)

Hello! Is it poem in prose? I like idea of your poem. Of course if you wanted to write the poem, it is not poem at all, because there is ...

I think, that this poem is support for person, who feels pain in the soul. Poem help readers to feel feelings of lyrical character.

Hello, Zaddy! I think, that your story is good. It is text-description. Good text-description. I think, it is very good to write some small stories. It also will help you, ...

I think, that beginning is good. You described all around main charecter :wink: